The story so far….Aspiring wannabe author Newton Fisher – that’s me, has had his first novel “The Differences” shortlisted for a prestigious literary award – that’s this. As part of the reward for getting on the shortlist; all us newbies get free mentoring on our book from a leading literary editor – that’s him. Now read on.
Phew! Well, that was not what I expected. Six weeks of grammar boot-camp and not until the end some feedback on the book itself. My previous editor – that’s him, had concentrated wholly on the structural aspects of the book. We had extensive chats on genre, reader expectations and plot planning etc. I suppose I was expecting similar with the editor appointed by the trust running the prize. But no dear reader…..this was something very different. This was a focus on the technical side of the book, the grammar, the punctuation, all the stuff they taught you in school, but you were too busy carving obscenities into the desk to pay attention. Oh yes, that stuff! And guess what? I am absolute pants at that bit. Realising my shortcomings, I took the decision to have the whole manuscript professionally copy edited – that’s her. Even after that, there were further requests for more attention to the technical stuff. So I installed Grammarly – that’s this, and manually went through the whole MS. Eventually, confused, I queried the purpose of all this as I was sure it would require further work should I get to the agent/publisher stage. Well, a valuable lesson has been learned. I was told that this process was to ensure the MS was suitable for submission to an agent, no more than that! Apparently, these days given the huge number of desperate novelists throwing themselves at the market; agents increasing reject on technical criteria as well as the expected issues round story, characters etc. So be warned, ignore the technical stuff at your peril. I now use Grammarly for all my writing, editing, checking and learning as I go. It’s not perfect, but it is infinitely preferable to peering at a text book.
Was it worth it? Ultimately yes. An important part of the learning process of becoming an author. And David did have a few kind words to say about the novel as a whole.
“For the first time I was able to read it through without any distractions and was able to get a feel for it as a novel at last, and I really did enjoy it, and I feel the potential I saw when shortlisting, has now been fully justified.
It reads well, having the sort of flow and pace that I feel are of the utmost importance to this genre. I liked the characters, and especially the dynamic between them as the narrative progresses. The juxtaposition of the scientific/political/ historical detail alongside the ribald passages involving Salt will not be to everyone’s taste, but that will come down to personal preferences. As a piece of fiction it displays the two very necessary basic elements; a great display of creative imagination, allied to really well crafted writing.”
The MS is now with an agent for comment/consideration. We await with baited breath.
In other news. I have started the second part of the “Steam” trilogy in earnest, About 12k words in and all the main plot lines established. It’s a more complex structure, three plots all running simultaneously that all end in a huge conflagration of…….well, now that would be telling.
See You Out There.